Well i like the way u start this poem but i think when it comes to the middle of it, i think u confuse urself by using the word mine instead of my...also there is an abrupt ending to some of the lines
eg:
Mine eyes are so powerful, powerful as my
Mouth yet while my mouth fails to speak the
Truth Mine eyes reveals it

i think it would be better if u say it this way:

My eyes are so powerful, powerful as my
mouth
yet while my mouth fails to speak the truth
My eyes reveals it

I mean those are juz some suggestions
But i must say tt ur content is there so keep it up;)

This one is completely amazing... it's so...Deep, and true... i love it!!! =]

Good