Comments : Dismantle, Revitalize, and Live

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Some say we should do more,
    but that's foolish to simply give.
    Why can't we just ignore;
    dismantle, revitalize, and live?
    **
    Somehow this stanza rings true.
    Your poem is very well done and intelligent in it's wording. I was pleased that I found and read it. I am trying to go through poems from the club in order to get to know the members.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Superb one ,

    hope you have a great futuer ones like that!