How very unsurprising that you have added another poem that leaves the reader absolutely speechless because it is so amazing!!! you know you really do have a lot of talent and your style of writing is just so unique and beautiful. i just loved the images your words portrayed, your descriptions were unbelievable. I really hope that you don't ever give up with writing because you have really got a lot of talent. and never fail 2 amaze!!! really wish i was able to give you more than just a 5 because you so deserve more!!! take care

I love how u infuse heaven and wicthcraft in ur love poetry interesting concept

Claps* Bravo this was wonderful. The only thing I have to ask about is whenever you mentioned Witches schemes. I'm asuming you mean witch's, which is ownership, as in it's the which who is scheming, it's her scheme.

Other than that lovely.

The rhyming was perfect and the flow was brilliant, oh and I know the contest and I thought it was a wonderful use of blue.

Five out of five.

My heart knows not which way to turn
For you it seems, it always yearns
This stolen heart that's chained and true
You cast a spell that you called blue
^^^My favorite stanza:)

I really loved the fst pace in which you wrote it, indeed it felt kinda like reading a song:)
Ah, love...the things we do and accept for it:)

Well done Grant:)

5/5 Ingrid

Top notch write mate, love the image you created in my minds eye, keep up the excellent work mate, cheers xp