by Bugg Sep 27, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You took my hand in yours |
by BREEawNUHH
"You took my hand in yours |
by Shinobi
This poem brings up so many memories... The situation you discribed is one that many probably experienced... |
by Stephanie
Sad, yet sweet. Your vocabulary was very simple yet it got the point across. The flow was smooth, and I couldn't really find anywhere where it wasn't. |
Opening stanza.. I thought the rhyme was good but the over all wording and such was really cliche, buuut anyways, the rhyme was good anyway. Also, I found that the word "you" was overused. |