Ocean

by claire   Sep 27, 2008


Sprinting in the sand
Just want to escape
Running to the ocean
Just want to drift away
As you hit the ocean
A wave collides with your legs
The harsh cold
Only captures you attention
For one moment
You keep fighting your way towards the deep
Never to give up
Waves collide with your body
Pulling you into a sufficating embrace
Which you are never to escape

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  • 16 years ago

    by XoXo

    This was awesome!
    i agree with the other people.
    the flow was a tad bit off but it was still amazing!
    i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is powerful i rekon, and like its really very descriptive. I liked it alot. The flow was a tiny bit off, to me. But other wise i really liked it. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Cool. almost like suicide, i like it.
    4/5