Comments : Muffled Screams

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I like this free verse poem for the content it is refreshing to see sympathy instead of harsh judgments of victims of abuse
    the only healing id through compasion even though thre is no quick fix

    your piece is well thought out

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Such a topic is very difficult to write about yet i feel your portrayl was beautifuly captured, the flow worked very well and your choice of wording was quite good. =]
    The only flaw i spotted was -
    How a father could do this (to) a sweet child of only eleven
    Youv'e missed out the word to
    Other than than a truely amazing job, excellent work deserving of a 5/5