A very artistic piece of work. You have a very rich imagination in you. I liked the descriptive words that were used here.. Mind blowing scene, mind blowing words, one fo the most beautiful poems that describes nature that i have ever read. Good job.

Wow. nice use of adjectives. love it, its awesome KM

LOve it nice word flow and imagery.l

This poem is beautifully.
imagery is descriptive and it makes the reader relate very well to it.

my favourite line was :
"Like a painted mural that catches your heart and soul,"
it is such a good comparison.

keep it up.

-naiive girl

Oh this is so beautiful. The imagery is just mindblowing. I can literally picture everything that you wrote in my mind. The flow was flawless, and overall, this was just amazing. (:

Well done.
5.5
Take care,
Stephanie.

For a short little thing, this is quite moving. I loved the vocabulary choice that you used and it's just generally a great nature poem. Autumn is beautiful. 5/5

jess ~

Reading your poem is like taking a walk through an Autumn landscape. Your discriptions paint the scene so clearly that it becomes almost three dimentional. I believe it is like an exploded Haiku, an elaborated version of a condensed short form...My favourite word is...pleasurement :)

Well done

Michael

The imagery is nice in this one, good job.

For us who live within the tropics, there is no such season as autumn...but i experienced it reading this poem.

For us who live within the tropics, there is no such season as autumn...but i experienced it reading this poem.

Nice imagery. Although that season is absent is my country, i can see it clearly through this poem. Well done.

As I read your words, I could not help but to read them aloud. The words just whisper ever so gently to the ear and sweep into the soul and settle peacefully.

I really enjoyed reading this poem and the imagery it created was wonderful

Excellent read !
Luanne

What a beautifull description of winter, and i like that you mention the smell because seasons do have their own smell . Well done

Grant

Reading this reminded me of my trips to Brown County, Nashville, Indiana. The smell of the pines, the color of the leaves in fall, the crisp cool air in October, covered bridges. Makes me want to pack my bags and head there right now. Excellent!!!

This poem is beautiful, I really understand it. I really enjoy the imagery, it really is autumn! Keep writing, always and forever...

Wow, you have painted a very beautiful picture of Autumn in my mind. Your words really describe this colorful time of year. I felt like I was walking in the middle of the forest during this beautiful season. Great Job 5/5

Beautiful, one of the nicest descriptions of fall I've heard, and it's a pretty common topic, being as beautiful as it is :)

great job, 5/5