I love it, great song. I almost got the tunes picked out in my head, if I could only write music lol. Thanks for a great read as always.

Sugar, hold me close
I am the one you chose
Stay with me through the night
Loving you feels so right

wow... i love this stanza... what a way to adapt this poem into a song... i can imagine playing a soft romantic tune on guitar and sing out the lyrics.

Amazing!!

I really liked it, especially the chorus....reading the chorus over and over again had a little instrumental playing in my head that made even more enjoyable