Happiness like this, doesn't last!!

Thank u

This is not one of your best, but not all of OUR poems can be. There is some creativity in it, the way you used your words though, I like that. Experiment a little more. A lot of times I'll go back many times to have it just right. Sometimes I come up with something brilliant, sometimes not sometimes I'll change it so much it becomes something entirely different. Important thing, is to keep trying;)

Aww the happiness can last sweetie! you just have to find the right people :]

you've got your family and friends and we all care for you here!

5/5 on the poem,

great job

Dude this poem is a very strong emotional feeling about a broken heart...Don't worry yoo'll never be alone in that situation thats life even though we didn't ask for it that's what we get....But awsome poem truly painful but true... 5/5