Dude this poem is a very strong emotional feeling about a broken heart...Don't worry yoo'll never be alone in that situation thats life even though we didn't ask for it that's what we get....But awsome poem truly painful but true... 5/5

Aww the happiness can last sweetie! you just have to find the right people :]

you've got your family and friends and we all care for you here!

5/5 on the poem,

great job

This is not one of your best, but not all of OUR poems can be. There is some creativity in it, the way you used your words though, I like that. Experiment a little more. A lot of times I'll go back many times to have it just right. Sometimes I come up with something brilliant, sometimes not sometimes I'll change it so much it becomes something entirely different. Important thing, is to keep trying;)

Thank u