Kinda diffent than your usual poems. Its good
that you can write all kinds of subjects. me I
don't think I have any passion about anything
but addiction and depressing things. This is
really good nicole I mean it its really good writting
5/5 cy

This poem was very nice, it made me feel so free when I was reading it...5/5

To me this poem showes a strong desire for freedom and to get away from everything in your life today.. There is a good saying that i heard not so long ago "It's not what they take away from you that matter, it's wjat you do with what you have left".. I believe that you can make your life great, right now, if you only believe in yourself and once again think positivie =) I can recommend a book for you that changed me.. It's called "The Secret"... I used to be a pessimist but now i only think positive :)