The Yellow Walls

by Blueleo   Sep 28, 2008


Every where I look, yellow wall is there
Trapped in a house with walls so bare
The light reflects on every service here
It brings yellow to all that does appear

So empty does it feel when I am alone
My heart is empty and turning to stone
How I wish I could go crazy and let go
Freeing my soul and becoming a hero

So silly are the ideas that flow at night
Coming and going to release any fight
No meaning left to ponder a night away
Just another sleepless night before day

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  • 16 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    I like it. reminds me a bit of a old goth story where this woman goes mad in a room papered in yellow wallpaper after noticing a spot and slowly peels away at the room & her sanity,

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    So silly are the ideas that flow at night
    Coming and going to release any fight
    No meaning left to ponder a night away
    Just another sleepless night before day

    ^^ I know of the demons that can haunt you, when sleep refuses to take control of you.. You manged to describe this feeling very well:)

    Take care!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Thats a new read for me! You did very well on making it flow. just perhaps instead of repeating the word night, try using dusk or twilight =]

    but i loved the second stanza the best. because i love it when wishes are put into writing, it makes me wonder why and ponder beyong the writing. but lol its funny how u included being crazy --> to a hero ^_^

    5/5

    ~tia

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