Comments : Circle of Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    Whoo! New poem ...
    Well, I'm definitely finding this piece very unique, as usual ... but under the cover of being unique, your poems - this one specifically - illustrates a brilliant meaning.

    "Resin holds us outside of the graves
    yet, indirectly, it is an executor,
    because every existence wanders
    through the complex structures
    until the dawn when it will stop."

    Well spoken, my friend. Well spoken.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Circle of life brings wind and the sun
    intersected into bonfire which lays within every heart.
    Staring in kaleidoscope built with letters and wet earth
    we will observe hemorrhage of each color."

    Beautifully written, and this has such a deep meaning hidden within. Nice work, very captivating work here. 5/5 from me, take care. Keep writing, always and forever...