People (Strangers)

by katy   Sep 28, 2008


If your on your own,
If your hurt,
If your down,
If your losing it,

The strangers around you,
Will they help?
Will they leave you?
Will they ignore you?

Some people will help you up,
Some people will push you down,
Nasty and nice,
Kind and hurtful,

Who will come to your rescue?

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  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    This doesn't really seem like a poem to me, it's more of a quote. I say this because there is a little too much repetition that isn't quite placed correctly. I did like the idea of this one, though. It gives the reader something to think about at the end of the poem. For something basic, it's damn good. 5/5

    jess ~

  • 16 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    I like this poem....it say's alot 5/5

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