The world is MYSTERIOUS!

by BonBon   Sep 28, 2008


Whenever I think about you
every single day
My heart gets stronger for you
even though you always go away

I want to move on
for I need to know you more
but I just seem I cant
you are someone I adore.

You never know
for the world is mysterious
we avoid things we shouldn't
and are minds get so delirious!

I don't even have to be around you that long
just a few moments
and you change my world
for I cant wait to be yours
so everyday is a wonderful dream!!!!!!!!

I wrote this poem cause sometimes I get myself to be attached to another person that I don't really know who they are! And then I start to like them a lot. This particular person doesn't know I even know that I like him this much. I hope someday I will be able to show him this poem that I wrote about him.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is very cute what you wrote, and it was enjoyable to read. Here are some thoughts:

    "I want to move on
    for I need to know you more
    but I just seem i cant
    you are someone i adore."

    I would capitalize all of the "i"s in your poem, I noticed sometimes you have them capatilized and other times you don't.

    Third line- "cant" should be "can't"

    Otherwise, good job with this poem. Take care and keep writing, always and forever...

    You never know
    for the world is mysterious
    we avoid things we shouldn't
    and are minds get so delirious!

    i don't even have to be around you that long
    just a few moments
    and you change my world
    for i cant wait to be yours
    so everyday is a wonderful dream!!!!!!!!