Comments : With unbroken wings

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a beautiful gesture which i'm sure Nana must have loved , the poem itself was beautifully written with good meter and the use of some nice words, all in all a peaceful and thought provoking poem . Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    ..Ingrid, you really are a very special lady. Not just for the things you say, but the things you do. Nana is one of these special women too, she like you has a heart of gold and will one day with support realise her real worth. Nana is a beacon brightly shining in a world of darkness.

    Well done Ingrid..and Nana if you read this, you are loved on this site more than you know!!

    Michael xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Ingrid
    ps: I posted this under Love is, because God is love, the energy that runs through all we are and all we see.
    ^ honestly that was one of my favorite parts that is so true and i think in today's world it takes a lot of guts to come out and be so passionate about God
    i really loved your poem it was unique and on a topic i love! : ) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    A wonderfully sketched lesson... How true you have said,
    Heaven and Hell are mere words created by men...

    Wow! Blow me down! Superb is the only word that fits this poem and I aint writing it for fun... I truly mean my words!

    Quite a motivation for people who are hanging between life and death!

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 16 years ago

    by James

    I really loved your poem. it was simply amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Very inspirational read. I know Nana and what she's going through so this poem took on a personal meaning for me. Your use of imagery here was just flawlessly luring me into your world and making me imagine each scene. The meaning behind your words were powerful and truly beautiful to read.

    I just loved the title. It fit the poem and its meaning perfectly.

    Well done.
    *5/5*