Another well written poem that started to bring a smile to my face until i read the last line. Shame hey.
This left me feeling rather melancholy, nut a lovely poem none the less
Spelling mistake sooth should be soothe
nothing major though
Well done
Grant

I know, the happiest day will be,
when you're far away from me.

now these where a bit like suprise!!!!!!!
:)

nice job

Jen,

You really got me there...a lovely poem describing a deep love, perhaps rarer still an enduring love, a love that caresses you with warmth and security even when apart. A reliable love, one that can withstand the pressures of this world and carry its momentum on and beyond any seeable horizon.

But no! I found my smile whilst thinking you had attained this with an open mouth of disapointment.

A well written piece, with good rhyme and meter of course. The fact that you suprised me was all the better, so consider your intended intension succesful.

Well done

Michael