I liked it though it could have i thought been better in a few spots but this was from your heart and thats where poetry is supposed to come from

I can relate to the distance you speak of in the poem, but if the love is strong enough the distance will seem shorter and shorter with time :) great job again 5/5 GG23

I really like thins poem, its teh stages i am going through now read my poem called "I Can't-But I'll try".. well doen with this poem..very special indeed