My Tears [Etheree]

by slighte   Sep 29, 2008


One
by one
they slowly
fall down my face,
reminding me of
what I want to forget.
the sweet bitterness lingers
in my dry mouth, leaving sadness
burning through my damp eyes, and sinking
towards my grey and faded aching heart.
I sit here, alone with nothing but tears,
streaming quickly down my frozen face
like dead leaves, floating in the wind.
one by one, each tear dissolves,
leaving me with a cold
vast emptiness, deep
inside of me.
my tears, they
fall like
me.

______
Double Etheree:
consists of 20 lines with syllables per line: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Nice eventhough cold ;) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Well written, God bless you. >_<

  • 16 years ago

    by sandy

    Wow.. that was beautiful.. keep it up hun

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im Speechless

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is really sad yet youv'e written it well!! I loved the style 5/5 Great work