Hey you, yes you, only you,

by A piece of my broken heart is embedded in you forever   Sep 29, 2008


Hey you, yes you, only you,
Who stole my heart,
Yes you, who tore my heart,

You, the unseen, the unheard,
Who makes me cry,
You,yes you, the unclean.

Yes you , who led me astray,
Who made me burn in the cold fire,
Yes you, who makes me weep pure tears,

Hey you, the one who hurts me,
Yes you, the unseen, the unheard,
yet you're near, near enough to be not seen,
you whisper in my heart,yes you, the unheard.

Hey you, yes you, the beautiful,
Just like a withered flower,
Just like a candle without a flame,
Like a body without a soul,
Like a flower without a smell,
Like an ornament,beautiful but useless.

Hey you, yes you listen, shhhhhhhhh, liten to this beat,
It's my heart my beating for you, yes only for you,
Only you, my soul seeks,
Yes you, who lies and cheat,
I cry, I weep
you smile, you grin,

Yes you, only you, who decieves,
The one without rules,
It is you and only you to blame,
Yes I mean you, who has no shame,
Who makes my eyes burn,
Who makes me ache,
It is you, only you, the eternal flame of pain,

Hey you, yes you, listen, shhhhhh, listen to this pain,
It's my heart hurting for you,
do you not care?
You, yes you, with piercing looks,
you, only you who made me fall,
you, no one but you, who sinned,
Yet I must pay, I must bear,
For your sins,

Hey you, yes you, only you,
Who stole my heart,
Yes you, who tore my heart,
You, the unseen, the unheard,
Who makes me cry,
You,yes you, the unclean.

Hey you, shhhhhhh,listen to this wave of ache,
It's my heart complaining that you give it too much pain,

Hey you, yes you, only you, shhhhhh listen to this..............

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    WOW! Who's the new poet here?
    Man, that was simply amazing. I know you're talented but this simply blew me away.

    "Hey you, yes you, only you,
    Who stole my heart,
    Yes you, who tore my heart,

    You, the unseen, the unheard,
    Who makes me cry,
    You,yes you, the unclean.

    Yes you , who led me astray,
    Who made me burn in the cold fire,
    Yes you, who makes me weep pure tears,"

    ^^That was a brilliant way to start and the repetition just added so much more of an impact to the whole poem.

    "Hey you, shhhhhhh,listen.......... "

    ^^ Simply brilliant way to end a poem. Though it may seem a bit abrupt but it fell through with the whole poem and added the effect that there is still more to come...

    If I could I would definately give this million/5.