Vanquished heart

by troy   Sep 29, 2008


I sit drowning in my loneliness
Walking through the waves of sorrow
I hoped for you and I together
But now I don't want tomorrow

You stole my last chance of happiness
Now empty, broken and hollow
A shadow of the man that I once was
In my own sadness I wallow

But its my own fault ...... never again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Short, but yet again, flawless, love your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Short, but yet again, flawless, love your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Great rhyming!
    your word choice couldn't be any better. from the beggining it showed the emotion you where feeling when you wrote that poem..flowed so well, and the ending couldn't be any better!=D

    like i said i love your poetry..so far all of them are my favorite!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Amazing!! fantastic word choice!
    i love that at first, it didn't seem like it rhymed..then i realized it did. it flowed so well.....

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