Amazing!! fantastic word choice!
i love that at first, it didn't seem like it rhymed..then i realized it did. it flowed so well.....

Great rhyming!
your word choice couldn't be any better. from the beggining it showed the emotion you where feeling when you wrote that poem..flowed so well, and the ending couldn't be any better!=D

like i said i love your poetry..so far all of them are my favorite!!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Short, but yet again, flawless, love your work.

Short, but yet again, flawless, love your work.