I liked it emotions spilled very well One thing is all the baby(s) I would use a diffrent word a few times cause using baby alot just messes with the mood set with this...though i liked it so much great job!

This is so beautifully written. It is full of emotion and I love it. It's sad but it doesn't leave me wanting to slit my wrists (which is a nice change after reading those way sad poems).
Keep up the amazing writing.
~Kayla