Smile, I liked it.

by troy   Sep 29, 2008


You made me float in clouds
Made my heart feel again
Made my world turn upside down
Made me see love is possible

You found me broken on the edge
Made me stand up off the ground
Made me think the impossible
Made me hope for the future

You showed me a new world
Made me see through your eyes
Made me know my heart still beats
Made me really want to be alive again

You let me love you back
Made me complete in your arms
Made me safe in your gaze
Made me feel whole from the first time

You inspired my faith in people
Made me think I was wrong about this world
Made me reconsider my belief in life
Made me dream of a better place to be

You proved me wright
Made me see that I was sain
Made me know that pain is real
Made me watch you leave

You stole my trust of poeple
Made me turn my back on the world
Made me think I am evil again
Made me see the truth of the heart

You broke my heart
Made me turn into the darkness
Made me reflect on things past
Made me wish for death

You helped me to see myself
Made me hollow inside worse than before
Made me lose the last hope for love
Left me complete in my hatred for the world

You were a gift
Give to me to know pain again
To help me fuel the fire and inspire
My resolve strenghtened I begin again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Yet another amazing piece, so sad, so full of emotion. love it

  • I love the twist!!
    it's perfect. the way you we're so happy to be with that person and then, BAM, happiness gone. so awful, some people don't give a damn who they hurt, and sometimes they end up hurting a wonderful person...
    beautiful poem! nothing should be Changed!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by Caitie B

    Very touching i loved it !!!!! keep it up and u no u should just live ur life to the fullest dont worry if u are in a relationship just take care of u and only u and in time u will find the perfect person that is right for u

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow i love the way this was written...it's long but it's still really good!!!
    great job 5/5