Can you not see?

by Cameron Olson   Sep 30, 2008


If u loved me

i would have known

if you loved me

it would have shown

your always there

breaking me down

making me feel worse than before

my signs of depression you only ignore

screaming and yelling my heart rate rises

over what?

I don't know

I'm scared and confused

to ask for is help is as bad as war

you prefer war over being my aid,

ill mess up from time to time

and you'll come down on me hard

ill do good from time to time

but do i get a "good job" or "wow"

or any other compliment?

no

your the devil on my shoulder

leading me life no where but down

if you loved me

i would have known

if you loved me

it would have shown

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  • 15 years ago

    by xxlightedbydarknessxx

    I love this one too. it's so beautiful, wonderful flow, and very meaningful. awesome poem.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mazie

    This is beautiful. i really like it.

    mazie

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful, i enjoyed every line. The flow was great and it really touched my heart, fantastic job 5/5.

    -mandy

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