Comments : Can't hurt the hollow

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow..i like this. i used to feel like this alot, and sometimes i still do.
    but i know that God is there, and He does answer us. yeah it takes faith to ask for help, and it's hard to keep believing when it seems everything is crumbling and no one's there. but if we keep trying, He'll answer us and always be there for us. you're never really alone...He's always there.
    hey if you need someone to talk to, pm me. i'll be here to listen to anything, ANYTHING you wanna talk about k? i know, i've been there, i've been thru alot....

    great poem tho..excellent write. i can really feel the emotions.......

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Wow!! your poem was filled with so much emotion. it was very touching and a very sad write. i related to few of the lines; u write how i feel sometimes. just keep your head high. its a great poem you've written. i particularly like the last verse. just amazing. keep it up! xo

  • 16 years ago

    by BROKEN ANGEL

    WOWOWOWOWO ...I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL MY FAMILY IS SO SEPERATED, THAT I FALL IN DEPRESSION ,IN SCHOOL EVERYONE PASSES ME BY LIKE I DON'T EXIST ,OR I'M JUST INVISIBLE TO THEM .... IN 10TH GRADE I WAS LONELY THE WHOLE YEAR DIDN'T MAKE ANY FRIENDS NOR ANYTHING , THEN I GOT USED TO IT ,BUT IHATED BEING THE ONLY GIRL IN MY SCHOOL WITH NOBODY TO TALK TO ...

    IT DIDN'T MATTER WHO I TALKED TO THEY NEVER LISTENED .... KEEP IT UP

    LOVE TO READ MORE OF YOUR POEMS...☺

  • "I collect the scars given to me
    try to connect them for a picture"
    Amazing line! with this line alone i can feel the emotion of the poem!! beautifully done you have great talent!

    Your poems are so wonderful and amazing!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Wow, so much raw emotion. captured so well. the reader can certainly put themselves in this position.