Wow..i like this. i used to feel like this alot, and sometimes i still do. |
by dora
Wow!! your poem was filled with so much emotion. it was very touching and a very sad write. i related to few of the lines; u write how i feel sometimes. just keep your head high. its a great poem you've written. i particularly like the last verse. just amazing. keep it up! xo |
by BROKEN ANGEL
WOWOWOWOWO ...I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL MY FAMILY IS SO SEPERATED, THAT I FALL IN DEPRESSION ,IN SCHOOL EVERYONE PASSES ME BY LIKE I DON'T EXIST ,OR I'M JUST INVISIBLE TO THEM .... IN 10TH GRADE I WAS LONELY THE WHOLE YEAR DIDN'T MAKE ANY FRIENDS NOR ANYTHING , THEN I GOT USED TO IT ,BUT IHATED BEING THE ONLY GIRL IN MY SCHOOL WITH NOBODY TO TALK TO ... |
"I collect the scars given to me |
by sezz
Wow, so much raw emotion. captured so well. the reader can certainly put themselves in this position. |