I agree with both TJ and Miss Take. You write with a wisdom that betrays your age. Such powerful meanings in your verses that it makes it difficult to believe you are so very young. Good work and don't ever stop writing. 5/5

Well arent i glad it ended how it did. i didnt want it to end sadly.. and im very happy that it didnt.
I think you wrote about the ofteen unseen love between a mother and a daughter extremely well. I took your poem as, the mother woke because deep inside she knew that something was not right with her daughter.. which is very strong love for ya :]
and then... it didnt matter what had happened to the girl that day, the love of her mother set everything straight and she remembered how loved she actually was..
beautiful :]
5/5