WHY???

by M00TM00T   Sep 30, 2008


Why is this happening
Im mad
Im sad

He wants me
He loves me
and I see why

Why friends
Why can't we be together
to love each other

Why can't they except this

He's sad
Im sad

Why is this bad

I know we love one another
but I don't want to be a bother

They say we're not ready
and we don't understand

Why treat me different
if we understand

Not the same im in pain
alone and loved
with such a name
Im growing and losing

time and time

The one I love is slipping behind
Just because they say no

we still can't let it go

They say not to worry
and to forget

The love we have will never leave

Even though Im alone
and in grieve

So why treat us different
Just because we love one another

*The love I have will never go*

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  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Hi, again Mootmoot. I want to help you with this poem If you don't mind.

    you wrote in the section;
    Even though I'm alone
    And in grieve

    Try this;
    Even though I'm alone
    I'm alone to grieve.
    Or...
    I am here to grieve.

    That would make more sense and it still wrimes with the word, leave.

    In the phrase...
    Why treat us different...
    add, "y" to say...
    Why treat us differently.

    I hope you don't mind if I pick appart your poem to help you make it better. In the end it's up to you what you want to do. Please don't take it the wrong way, my freind. ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Im a poetic scholar

    This poem is sad again because as ur friend i know wats goin on. All u can do is keep ur faith and hold ur head up high and dont let go of the love u guys share ok

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