Falling hard

by niiicolleeex   Sep 30, 2008


It was those late nights when we all would hang out,
That I started to fall for you,
It was all the jokes and the way you made me laugh,
That really made me fall deep,
It's when you look me in the eyes,
And I'd get lost deep within them,
It's when you look at me and I look at you,
And then we both look away,
Was when I started to think you loved me too,
It's when I felt sick because I was going to see you,
That made me know I could never give up on you.<3

Hey, well I know this isn't that good but thank you for reading, rate and comment please, I need to know if its good.[=

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  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria O

    Its really lovely poem u wrote. Im talkin 2 somone but its long distance, and i miss him lots. good job on writing the poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    Thats how i feel with my Baby girl :(... I know me n her cant last. She Saved my life From a life of Suicide and depression.. Now i know her parents wont accept me so instead to get away im joining The navy Lol and have been accepted Nice poem. 5/5 It really captures ur emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by niiicolleeex

    Commentt andd rate please kaythankss[=<3