"Of yarn upon yarn -- vampire of free will." I wish I could dream of the images you create in all your poetry... this line just... inspires me beyond words. :)

I like how you kept that idea of unwinding the earth like yarn from that point on throughout.

you're an amazing writer.
the theme is different, and unexpected which is a good read.

favourite line:
"You have tied lives together
With insatiable and brave adverbs."