Our Astral Dreams

by NightFlyer   Sep 30, 2008


Pearly moonbeams of the night
Silver glow on all I see
Shining Luna's gift so bright
On the darkness fluidly.

Song of crickets in the air
On wings of dreams, it sets me free
To a place without a care
Sweet early morning symphony.

Through wispy clouds of evening, pale
Orion reigns in heavens high
And so with humble words I hail
The opal beauty of the sky.

So let us take a cosmic ride
On a sail boat down nocturnal streams
And till the dawn, our boat will glide
In the splendor of our astral dreams.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind words Breaking Dawn abd Snowryter. I love sharing these words from my heart here!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    That is so true, the night is very enchanting. I loved the imagery that passes my mind when I read throught this, it touches my heart so much. Very captivating and entranching as your description took me to a land beyond. I also liked how you wrote "pearly moonbeams", very unique and beautiful. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you all very much for your kind comments. Glad you liked my poem, inspired by a moonlit walk I took in the early morning hours. I prefer the night because there is something so enchanting and mystical about it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very beautiful! Your imagery is top notch... Always a pleasure reading your poems...

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The imagery certainly drew me in and held my attention along with the diction. It had a slight dream-like atmosphere as I was going through it. The mention of Luna and Orion was a nice touch. Really can't pinpoint anything wrong with this piece.
    ~Faith-less

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