by smiley Sep 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I live to but a smile on people face |
by Brittany C
This was an ok poem. Don't use the same words over and over again it is to repetitive. The poem could also be a little longer but thats not to big of a problem you keep the length the way it is if you want. I give it a 4/5. Try using some different words. |