by Ashley Q Sep 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I know I'm not perfect. |
There is a certian humility in writing self deprecating poems, and you have shown it here beautifully. You do not need to be perfect girl, just benevolent in love. |
by Lady Nik
I like the way you wrote this. Changing from "I" to "you" was very clever. I love the emotions as well. Very deep piece. Keep it up, how you know that you're a great writer :) Nik |