Regurgitation
by Michael D Nalley Sep 30, 2008
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When we consume unhealthy substance can we hesitate? |
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15 years ago
by Teria
"Let us bow to creator, as we marvel at the wonder of creation"
[Let us bow to THE creator, as we marvel at the wonder of creation.]
- Some people might not like the change I made with this line. While I was reading the poem over and over everytime I felt that it needed to be changed. It bugged me a lot, lol.
You have a good poem here. Honest truth. Luckily you didn't regurgitate it, eh? Haha. When I seen the title of this poem I knew you'd come up with something clever to go along with it OTHER than actual imagery of regurgitating. Thank goodness you did, that would be disturbing. -
16 years ago
by gracey grey
The gist behind this poem, if i may add, is terrific!! Words, as conniving as it comes, although with truth tagging along, does have an effect which many a times gets "hard to digest" as you rightly mentioned. And words, that which should heal, infact redirects to the one uttered taking an ugly sight.....in short well done!!
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16 years ago
by Robert
The images are played out great and the message was well done. It told a story, and a the mean resided in every word. I gave it a 5 for the combination of style and flow great job Plot121...
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16 years ago
by Ash
Excellent poem! So true are your words that it reaches to the depths of our souls and uncovers the dust that silently collects in front of our eyes.
"When we consume unhealthy substance can we hesitate?
To taste bitter truth is hard to digest, and we often regurgitate
Spitting out words like vomit, that are sometimes offending
Naturally returning disappointment when not pretending"
^^ Amazing start to the poem and in this stanza you have said so much and awakened the realisation of the harmful effects of a few words when cast without any consideration unto another soul. I like the imagery used here.
Simply the entire poem was amazing. This truly deserves nothing less than 100/5. :)
