by Sweetdream Sep 30, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
I dawn a knick-knack mask of broken glass and mirrors, |
"I try looking in a mirror but my mask only reflects a mirror maze" |
Well done! I have a huge fascination with mirrors, masks and reflections, so I particularly enjoyed this poem. Though Knick-Knack felt out of place at first, it seemed to fit better as I finished the poem. Wow, wonderful use of vocabulary; you really zoned on the connotations of the words you used. |