Also a wonderful peice!
I loved it i hate how people see homeless kids and feel no ounce of sadness...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVbZmCQT6Ec watchthis idk it reminded me of your poetry

Lord of the flies? Were you referencing the book?
Regardless, I hate seeing people in poverty, people in pain and suffering... So your poem speaks to me.

Awsome dude..............5/5