Whisper In The Wind

by Aubrey   Oct 1, 2008


Dark Hair
Emerald Eyes
Crying Tears
Holding Lies

Overshadowed thoughts
Pen in hand
Scars on wrists
I dont know that I can

Tears of red
Heart of black
Feelings of blue
Are coming back

End this torturing
I know its hard
Drop the knife
You'll never go far

Slamming fists
Into the wall
Dont let anyone see
All your scars

Weak in view
Never strong
Thoughts of death
My minds all wrong

Screaming in agony
Dont want to feel pain
My voice never heard
As I scream in the rain

Crimson lines on my arm
Shattered thorn in my heart
Chaotic madness spread throughout
In this love...I have no part

Cry like me
In the dark
All alone
With a broken heart

Stabbing knife
Piercing hurt
Puddle of blood
No one heard

Body lifeless
On the floor
No air in lungs
Like before

No one cared
No one saw
All the pain
That caused it all

Now theres no more
Nothing can be done
Im already dead
Lifes no fun

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  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This poem had a really good story set into it, it was full of emotions and it had a good flow. bar this one stanza:

    Slamming fists
    Into the wall
    Dont let anyone see
    All your scars.

    It didnt seem to go with the rest of the poem rhyming wise.. if you know wat i mean.
    But other then that its really good well done.

    Keep it up!
    *Hunny*

  • 15 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    It's really good in some parts. like -
    "End this torturing
    I know its hard
    Drop the knife
    You'll never go far"

    but it started losing it at the end.
    But the overall story line is very moving.

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Very creative. nice work

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