Very creative. nice work

It's really good in some parts. like -
"End this torturing
I know its hard
Drop the knife
You'll never go far"

but it started losing it at the end.
But the overall story line is very moving.

This poem had a really good story set into it, it was full of emotions and it had a good flow. bar this one stanza:

Slamming fists
Into the wall
Dont let anyone see
All your scars.

It didnt seem to go with the rest of the poem rhyming wise.. if you know wat i mean.
But other then that its really good well done.

Keep it up!
*Hunny*