by RavishingEruption Oct 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I see all these girls |
Wow you are an amazing writer! honestly i love the style you write in it makes you unique! i could so relate to this because this guy i dated that im so head over heels for is ten times better than anyone i deserve he is perfect and i am always affraid he will want something more than i can offer him or that there is someone better out there and that i may be ruining that for him anyway great job! 5/5 |
You shouldn't worry about the way you look or the way he looks at you for those reasons. None of us can control the way we look in the mirror, but we can control the people we are and the way others look at us. Excellent job on this piece :) 5/5 GG23 |
I like this poem. very understanding and it can be related to easily. good job 5/5 |