I need you

by crystaljean88   Oct 1, 2008


In desperate need,
Of love and affection.
I feel lost,
not getting attention.

The tears hurt,
so does my heart.
A new life,
I tried to start.

Head over heals,
your the one.
I love you,
not just anyone.

You have me,
and my daughter.
Please don't leave,
that would hurt her.

Not only her,
but also me.
Your my soul,
setting me free.

Everything to me,
is what you are.
If you do leave,
don't go far.

For I need you,
now and eternity.
Together forever,
were meant to be

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow i love how you craft this beautiful poem. I can see the affection that you have for this person. It was written so simple and straight forward that it enables me to visualize the whole poem throughout.

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    Well done i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    1sr stanza line 2 "f" should be "of" and last stanza last line "were" should be "we're"
    other then that the poem is great. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess

    This is great im so sorry to i understand your pain i really do

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