Saying bye

by dora   Oct 1, 2008


Lower the sunlight outside & shut my bedroom door
Close my eyes forever, if I can't see you any more
Pull me close to you so I can stay in your embrace
Turn around so you don't see the tears on my face.

Running a thousand miles just to see you at the end
But you're not even there you're not even my friend
When you held me in your arms, I knew I was home
But you ran away and now I'm scared and all alone.

Behind every laugh and every smile is a hidden tear
Deep down always, losing you was my biggest fear
If someone said three years from now you'd be gone
I would've made sure that they were proved wrong

I speak a million words to you but you don't even hear
If only I could turn back time so I could hold you near
Turn off that radio, for that song reminds me of him
He was my knight in shining armour, my sweetest sin

Reality turned into a nightmare of which I can't escape
I've been thrown into the jungle and bitten by a snake
I long for that phone call where you ring me to say hi
But I end up in a river of tears constantly saying bye

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    OMG, this is so sad but beautifully written with lots of inspirational words. Perfectly flawless, 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Aaah another cool poem by u..,..its deep and it can be completely imagined..feels like a 5/5 for u^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Dora that was just...heart-wrenching !!
    I loved it from beginning to the end.
    Although there were some cliche words here.
    but still didn't lessen the beauty of the piece..

    Running a thousand miles just to see you at the end
    But you're not even there you're not even my friend

    this was just soooo teary...writing this piece...I can imagine you cried a lot while & after finishing it.

    My heart is with you babe
    Write on I'm sure writing is one of the best ways to release the pain =]
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Goodness. idk why i didn't read this sooner. i havent been reading or writing much either. but this really brought me to tears, honey. i miss all your poems! i was shocked to see them gone. and now this . . . this is probably the most heartbreaking thing ive read from you. and i still loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I loved every word of this piece! very heartfelt yet sad. but so beautiful in my eyes. the part about it being 3 years i can sort of relate because this poem reminded me of my first love and it's been 3 years since we were together, and i must say i feel the exact same way, you said just how i'm feeling. but all and all i loved this piece, very creative, you can make your words come to life and keep the reader wanting more. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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