This is one of the sweetest poem out of your masterpiece collection. I really loved this poem & i rem the day you shared this poem with me, that morning itself i was watching my son sleeping with a smile on his face, thats the best gift one could dream of, it makes every pain worth living for.
Loved the complete concept and the way you presented, great poem dear

all the best and take care

Cindy..

I absolutely loved this. The first stanza gave me goose bumps with its timelessness. You manage to re-capture your sweet memories of your son and paint a verse with them.

Although you relay happy memories, it has undertones of sadness, a kind of emptiness that those innocent days have past...and oh so quickly too.

I will try and treasure my moments with my son and live his childhood through his eyes.

Thank you for sharing your deep precious memories.

Take care

Michael

Beautiful, very sweet and loving Cindy

What a touching dedication poem you've penned here my friend.
Time goes by so quickly doesn't it ... just seems like yesterday my boys were in diapers.

Beautiful poem
~Hugs~
Luanne

Wonderful beautiful work. seems I can only write from pain. I think it's a true talent who can write from love

A wonderful tribute to your son,and I know what you mean, the time passes so quickly. An excellent write Cindy!

Beautiful job, you truly have a way with the simplist of words, you turn them into pieces from heaven, amazing job.

5/5

That was really beautiful. Excellent flow and the emotion behind it really came through wonderfully! Great job. (:

Thank you for this moving write. its sad how fast this time passes us by. i pray we use whats left to enjoy each other. i love you very much. john

Very moving tribute to your son. I know he has to be proud.

Awww..how sweet.. I love it..
Excellent poem!..
5/5

I really loved this poem. It reminded me of my son as soon as I read it. I remember the day I had him and he's already three! It feels like yesterday but I remember the awe I felt when I watched him snuggle up to me. What a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this!

Megan