by Sman Oct 1, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I sit here watching you talk to him |
by SIMPLY ME
Hey,good,i think the title is good.5/5 |
Wow!!! i know how u feel.. i love it.. like every single poem u rote! Awesome job once again... =) ya.. i agree with her pm when the song is done.. it's going pretty awesome already.. |
Very good what u have so far. pm me when the song is done. great work. 5/5 |
by dora
Hey i really like your work. i love its structure. i think the title fits as uve got it. well done. 5/5 xo. |