Hey i really like your work. i love its structure. i think the title fits as uve got it. well done. 5/5 xo.

Very good what u have so far. pm me when the song is done. great work. 5/5

Wow!!! i know how u feel.. i love it.. like every single poem u rote! Awesome job once again... =) ya.. i agree with her pm when the song is done.. it's going pretty awesome already..

Hey,good,i think the title is good.5/5