Lovestruck

by dora   Oct 1, 2008


As beautiful as the sun is on a summer day
You filled my heart with bliss in every way
When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
You were my angel sent to me from above

Your beautiful smile, picture perfect in my mind
You were always my protector & never unkind
When lightening struck and we entered a storm
You would hold me close & you'd keep me warm

My dreams came true when I became your all
Becoming my umbrella, protecting me from rainfall
My world was at peace, lying in your arms at night
You were my hero saving me from my any fright

But my heart will go on, longing for your touch
I hope you still know that I love you so so much
You're still the man of my dreams as I write u this
Tonight I'll go to bed, and I'll dream of our first kiss.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    The best ones are always dreamt about. So beautiful yet sad that it's just a dream. Perfect as always though. 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Gosh..u rhyme so good.......all ur poems r great...and dis piece is really cool.....sry im bad at commenting...but good work is always appreciated =)

    peace~

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem, it really shows how you were feeling at that moment in time. I thinkt hat it was written very quickly because it's just that good.

    When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
    You were my angel sent to me from above

    Those two lines have been used so many times, especially the ending; which I'm referring to. Love and Above have been rythmed so many times.

    I loved the last Stanza it's really good. I loved that, I read it a few times. Very good lines. I loved it and really appreciated the read.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenxheartedxangel

    Amazing!
    My favorite out of all the poems I've read so far!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by *emmax*

    The imagery is vivid and provokes one's mind to "see" the poem come alive.

    A wonderful piece indeed!

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