Agoraphobia

Lovelovelove this. very good

Wow amazing use of imagery and very vivid language.its a hard topic to write about yet you pulled it off beautifully.
great job once again!
5/5
take care:)

Brilliant! Absolutly brilliant! I'm going to add you on my favorites, so you'll soon discover this, but I'm a truth teller. I don't deal in lies, and I genuinely think this piece was great! You've got such great wording, which gives you such a strength when it comes to rhymes. I loved the tone of this piece too. Sadly, I can't find a favorite stanza or line, because it's all equally good. I rarely do this, but I actually gave this piece a 5/5 rating.

Brad

Amber: you're right, agoraphobia is just like prison but with an invisible warden. but it's almost an inviting prison. because once you step outside those limits, you lose your sense of safety. you feel exposed to the world around. it's a horrible feeling. i have a combination of agoraphobia and social phobia. so i'm always feeling like someone is staring at me or judging me. i can't stand in a line at the grocery store without someone by my side (someone i trust very much) this stems from years of thinking i was never good enough. it's rooted in my head that i'll never meet the standards of a normal society. i was scared to put this poem on here, for the very reason that it is so personal. i didn't want people treating me any differently because i have this disorder. like it said, i hate to show any sign of weakness, because i'm such a fragile person in reality. i feel like someone is going to take advantage of that. but I appreciate each comment on here so much. thank you for your kind and encouraging words everyone. :)

Hi love, my mom went through years of this, when she was younger, but got through it, your poem says it all, hope you get through it too, xP