Grant,

You have managed to create a poem that matches the speed of your bike. I read each verse as you describe the incredible acceleration through the gears; the euphoric sensations you feel as you speed at break neck speeds, the bends and the adrenalin peaking along with the bikes demons speed.

I have never ridden a bike, but reading this I feel like I have tasted a little of the amazing you thrill that you must receive whenever you sit on that saddle and turn the ignition, roar, roar!!

Well done

Michael

No peddle car here I see. I felt the Gs all the way over here well done.

Tears streaming, running down my face
Wind plucking at me, at this crazy pace
TJ's burns hay, while mine burns gas
While he picks up horsesh@t I'll just relax

^^^HA HA HA! This last stanza made me laugh soooooooo loud!
I love how you and TJ get along, it shines from everthing you write about him. I adore him too, he is a golden child:)
I am not going to say anything anymore about the contest, I have read only beauties sofar!

Good luck!

5/5 Ingrid

Hahaha Pick on TJ week Love it

Great poem Grant, I could almost feel the wind in my face ..Lets just ride up wind from TJ with all this H/S around don't want it to assault the nostrils..love ya TJ haha

That was an exhilirating ride! Thank you!

Ahhhhh!!! I am seriously running out of things to say about your poems!! They are so fantastic!!! But even me saying that doesn't describe what a talent you have!! Seriously this poem is amazing and I wouldn't be surprised if you didn't win the contest with this outstanding piece of writing! You should be awarded! Actually no you should get your poems published!! Haha!! Amazingg write and also i have read two poems of your that talk about TJ :D I see that you two both get along amazingly :D
xxxxxx

Brought back memories of riding behind someone with the wind blowing in my face, going faster and faster. Thanks for taking me back to that time.