by Deana Oct 1, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Servant of mine, why do you weep? |
by Amber
The flow was amazing on this poem. |
by Corinne
You've used a unique setting and voice to let us in on the feelings of the person who thinks they have given someone everything they think they'd uld hope for |
by ricky
I am confused by this. The writer seems to be upset because their loved one is not happy with the material things they have provided. A feeble attempt at a show of affection. Yet the reciepent of these things does not say " THIS IS NOT WHAT I WANT OR NEED FROM YOU" I see a lack of communication between all parties here. Sorry if I am analizing the content instead of commenting on the structure, I guess its just the counsellor in me. |
Ouch! cold ending tho so true. often the world's riches are not enough, because the more one has, the more one will always desire. nicely written :) |
by Ingrid
Deana, |