Haiku: Sunlight

by Katie   Oct 1, 2008


With yellow flakes of sunlight.
The bowl shimmers with
Endless fright

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is very beautiful, but you have the syllable count for a haiku all wrong. This is how it should be:

    5
    7
    5

    You have the syllalbes all mixed up, but I did like what you wrote here. Keep writing, always and forever...

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