Take My Fate

by Katie   Oct 1, 2008


This needs to stop,
It can't go on.
Eleven months
Is far too long,
For anything
To be like this.
It can't go on,
Without a fix.

He doesn't know
What can be done.
Nor do I.
This isn't fun.
He shows me hate
To humiliate.
Take my fate,
You're not my mate.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Liked the end, with the clever rhyming, but it was too choppy for me. And couldn't grab my attention.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robbiez EMO Heart and Soul

    Does this mean anything? should i be worried?

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    I really liked this! in fact i like your style, short and simple, i think the choppy feel makes your points sharper!

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